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A nightmare..

Each morning when you woke up and rolled out of bed and got ready for school or Hell in your opinion you knew it would end up as it did every day, a nightmare.

You could practically hear the imitations of cow's they would do as you walked down the hall or the middle school names they would call you like pig, or fatty every time you turned a corner.

You've gotten used to the name calling and other obscene and immature acts they would do towards you. You ignored it entirely and kept a cold expression most of the time.

But…

In a way you weren't used to it…

Thanks to the name calling over the years, there was this voice in your head mocking you, yelling at you.

Hey fatty

Look out, the great white Whale's feasting!

Move out of her way before she crushes you!

You felt the tears start to sprout in your eyes as you quickly wiped them away and pounded your head.

"Get out of my head!" You yelled tugging your hair hoping there was a way to get rid of those damn voices.

You knew the years of verbal abuse had taken a toll on you, emotionally scarred you deeply, but you wouldn't let your best friend know that.

Alfred Jones was your best friend, has been since the fourth grade when he stood up for you against some of the bullies that made you their target. Ever since then, you two had been close.

Over the years, you've developed a deep crush on Alfred, but of course you kept it to yourself daring not to tell him because you knew exactly what would happen.

Rejection..

It was something you were used to through the years, it was like your thing, always getting rejected.

You couldn't take that huge chance, getting rejected by Alfred might be the thing that would push you over the edge of just ending it all as terrible as that sounds.

You stood in front of your full length mirror studying the body that you hated to see each day wishing it looked thinner, more toned, but it wasn't. It was flabby and plump. There was no way Alfred would want you to be his girlfriend, he was to handsome to be with you.. he deserved better.

"That's what you get when you let your heart win!"

Your phone went off as you quickly grabbed it from the nightstand and flipping it to see a text from Alfred.

Hey babe, be there in 10 ;)

You smiled lightly at the text. He started calling you babe for some reason, you really didn't care because it made you feel important to him.. like he actually cared about you in a way.

Alright, I'll be ready :3

You flipped your phone closed and hurried to your closet to grab something to wear for the long day ahead, thank goodness it was Friday, and you couldn't take another day at the hell hole you called school.

You threw on your (favorite color) skinny jeans and a (favorite band) T-shirt and grabbed your favorite (favorite shoes) as you went in search of socks to wear. You heard a honk outside and cursed as you quickly put your socks and shoes on and quickly ran a brush through you (hair length and color) and quickly grabbed your backpack and rushed down the stairs and out of the door.

As you walked to Alfred's red Mustang you saw him waving at you through the windshield. You smiled back at him and waved back before getting into the car.

"Morning dude!" Alfred said leaning over to give you a hug which you accepted as you hugged him back inhaling his wonderful scent.

"Morning Alfred, sorry I didn't get out her quicker." You said as you reached behind you to put your seatbelt on.

"No problem babe, all that matters is I got to see that rockin' body of yours." He said giving you a wink as you let out a laugh and gently shoved his face.

"Whatever you dork, let's get going." He smiled lightly at you as he backed out of your driveway and headed towards the school.

"So¬_______, you coming to my party tonight?" Alfred asked you as he poked your side making you squeak and swat his hand away.

"No I'm not and don't do that Alf, you know I don't like it." You said gently giving him a slight pout.

"Please ______! You've never been to one and I invite you every time and babe, if you keep making that adorable face, I'm gunna keep poking you." He smirked at you as you pouted even more at your failed attempt.

You wouldn't mind the poking, but it was another reminder that you weren't skinny, you were fat. It made you feel like the Pillsbury Dough boy whenever Alfred poked you. He didn't know how it made you feel except for jumpy which your excuse to him was.

Fatty

He'll never love you pig!

He wants someone skinner, prettier, someone that's not YOU!!

"_____!!" You snapped out of your daze as the voices quickly left your mind and you looked up into Alfred's worried face. You looked around your surroundings and noticed you were already at school.

"God _______, don't do that again man." Alfred gently grabbed your hand. You looked down at your hand that was in his and noticed you were visibly shaking.

"_______, are you okay, I'm gunna take you to a doctor." He pulled the car keys back out of his pocket, but you stopped him.

"Alfred, I'm fine don't worry about me, we're going to be late if we don't get in the building." You said as you reached down the grab your bag.

"Babe, you sure you want to go to school today, you're still shaking." He said unsure about your suggestion. You flashed him a small smile and nodded. He narrowed his eyebrows slightly.

"Alright ______, but promise me you'll call me if you start to feel weird at all okay?" He asked placing a firm hand on your shoulder.

"Okay Alfred, I promise." He smiled at you and held out his pinky for you. You giggled at the childish act but held your pinky out as well and wrapped it around his.

"Let's get going babe." You nodded and followed him towards the hell that was known as High School. He slung his arm around your shoulder pulling you closer to him. You felt a slight blush cross your (s/c) skin.

As you both got closer to the school, he detached himself from you. His class was on one end of the school while yours was on another. Before he made his way towards his first class he turned to you and pulled you into a tight hug.

Yes, Alfred hugged you many times, but this hug felt different. You couldn't explain it but it felt more intimate in a way. You wrapped your arms around his neck and hugged back.
"Remember your promise okay ______?" He asked looking at you. You nodded and smiled as you both let go of one another and went separate ways.

As you made your way to class images of Alfred and you kissing, going on dates, and other things popped up flashing through like a slideshow of some sorts. You smiled at those mental images wishing that they would become a reality for you, but as you continued to make your way to class, the torture started…

"Here comes the Whale!" Your eyes snapped over to a skinny girl who made the comment as you gave her a hard glare to which she took a step back from. You put on that hard mask you did each day as you walked inside the classroom and took your seat in the back like usual.

The teacher started the lesson, but you were in your own little world not really caring about the lesson or the usual whispers about you that floated around class.

The one thought on your mind was seeing Alfred again.

You felt something hit your chest and roll on your desk as you stared at the paper ball that got thrown at you. You rolled your (eye color) eyes and picked the note up and saw the usual picture of a Whale with your face on it which was drawn very poorly. You crumpled the note back up and threw it to the side not really caring.

Yup, it's going to be a total nightmare today….
I've loved the chubby reader inserts here on DA and I've decided that there are not enough!! There must be more! So, I wanted to try my hand at one!

Chapter 2 will be up fairly soon.

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:iconitalyisapastafarian:
italyisapastafarian Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student
i swear if that was me i would be like bitch if you don't shut the f*ck up right now i will go Jamaican on yo skinny ass *kisses teeth*
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PandoraDeath Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the chubby reader stories but I have to say my favorite one so far was a Prussia one where the reader is proud of her body and tells him off. EPIC! 
But I love your stories to they're so cute.
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ThatHetaliaFreak9 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love that one... Chubbylicious It was called...

(SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT...)
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Young0justice0lover Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
thx for writeing this story it makes girls who arent so skinny feel bettre about themselves
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xXGothicLifeXx Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Well this so called whale has muscles so you skinny a** twigs better watch out. *mumbles a few curse words*
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
this story acually makes me feel better bout myself
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:icontreekoi:
Treekoi Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student General Artist
If those b*tches called me whale, I'd be like: :iconbitchpleaseplz::iconsaysplz: "Which one of you twig b*tches said that? Great story btw!
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Phantomgirl17 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Writer
part 2! Part 2!! PART 2!!! *gives the Puss in Boots look*
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
:3 I actually have the next few parts posted already :)
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this story!!!!!! I am chubby and proud of it!!!!!
Part 2 PWEASE~?!!!!!
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Thanks hun and you should be love! :3 I actually have the next few parts posted already :)
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:iconbluelight01:
BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!
Your welcome!!!
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
want chapter two so bad!!
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IAmHannah01 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
A few years ago someone wrote a note saying 'Hannah is fugly'. In primary school, I got my breasts earlier than everyone else so I was constantly bullied by four boys and my ex-friend. I've heard voices like that in my head, too. Even now, whenever somebody asks what I think of myself. I always hear "You'll never be good enough. You'll never be strong enough. You were never conceived in love. You'll never rise above." I've been told these things by people, who are supposed to care about me. Nice story so realistic.
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:iconminanarulover:
minanarulover Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Don't feel bad everybody is different and you were made perfect so let them tell you rude stuff as long as you know that you're better then them. :hug:
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IAmHannah01 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
Thank you so much. :handshake:
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
This is my childhood in a nutshell only it was 100 times worse. Hit me right in the feels man!

Can't wait for next chappy~ ;)
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HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this actually happens to me at school a lot none of my friends know not even my parents I just put up a façade and listen to loud music. but I really loved your story
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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist
Dude, I love ur chubby reader stories. I used to be chubby until I lost weight last summer. But seriously, no one at my school calls anyone chubby unless if u want a rearranged face or missing body part. I'm technically an African American, so people don't really talk about how chubby u are (don't wanna sound racist).
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mossheart12nya Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
if someone called me a whale I would go to my friends remi and Sam Remi would beat their faces in and Sam would try to be peaceful but still beat their faces in
I have overprotective friends DERP

I use the Dragon to type my comments you speak and it types so if there's any graver mistakes blame it on technology
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AwesomeDude33 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Artist
I swear,If I was at school at dat beaoch called me a "Whale" I WILL GO ALL KING KONG ON HER XD

I'm chubby and proud

everyone else,go home *puts shades on* xDD

but there are moments where I hate my body xD

WHY!? :iconshakesplz:
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Dude! Brofist me! -puts on shades- chubbies unite! -brofist-
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:iconawesomedude33:
AwesomeDude33 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Artist
YES -brofist-


WE SHALE MAKE ALL DEM HOES KNOW WHATS IT'S LIKE TO BE CHUBBY! *playswith my stomach* hehehehe......squishy
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
O3O -
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:iconawesomedude33:
AwesomeDude33 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Artist
OUO
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
~( OuO )~ :icondipperplz:
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:iconawesomedude33:
AwesomeDude33 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student Artist
:iconmableplz:
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student General Artist
:D
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zutarafan4evea Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
if that had been me being called a whale i'd been like you know what at least i'm not allergic to carbs.
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Amen to that! XD
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:iconzutarafan4evea:
zutarafan4evea Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
its because it sticks to my abs. lol
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EternalRavenDreamer Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I once got called a whale by a boy who weighed more than me. I didn't take it well, but I laughed my sides off when he got suspended the next day. Karma.
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bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Lmafo! XD That boy totally had it coming :) Yeah, I used to be called a whale back in school by girls three times my size which made no sense at all. At least I didn't have to get into the building doors sideways. :p
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MonteDeNeko300 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Man if i was there when that one chick called meh a whale ...
I would be like
:iconbitchpleaseplz:
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Same here.
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MonteDeNeko300 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student General Artist
It's all rainbows from here on out
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:iconmontedeneko300:
MonteDeNeko300 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep~
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AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
domigawsh... your gunna make me cry. I just know it...
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:iconmikuada:
Mikuada Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Can't wait till more comes out!!!!!
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:icondangerouspop:
Dangerouspop Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Do you have an account on fanfiction.net?
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Yes I do it's tdi-lover89
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:icondangerouspop:
Dangerouspop Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Okay yes I already read your story! It's very good by the way!
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Oh my, well thank you! :)
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:icondangerouspop:
Dangerouspop Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Welcome! I favourited your story also!
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Grellegirl17 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Artist
is there a chapter two?
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Chapters 2 and 3 are in my gallery I just didn't put a link from chapter 1 :)
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Grellegirl17 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Artist
OH! Cool!
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ikutolovins58 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
people can be so mean.
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:iconbonkers-4-hatter:
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
So very true :/
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