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"Come on (Name), open up!"

You crossed your arms and huffed at your Blue eyed German boyfriend who was trying to feed you some Peppermint pie and shook your head.

"Vhy not, iz my baking zhat terrible?" The German asked you putting down the fork that had the delicious looking pie on it.

"Of course not Luddy, you're baking is amazing!"

"Then vhy are you not eating it?" He asked inching his face closer to yours. A blush appeared on your (Skin color) cheeks as you cleared your throat.

"I-i'm on this new diet if you have to know." The German frowned at you and pulled you into his lap as he sat on a chair at the kitchen table. His arms wrapped around your waist as he pulled you closer.

"Liebe, vhy do you do this to your self?" You frowned slightly at his tone. He sounded sad.

"I just want to be beautiful Ludwig." You sighed sightly thinking how much he deserved someone better, someone thinner. Someone who wasn't you, chubby and plump.

" (Name), Ich liebe dich no matter what you look like." You felt the German nuzzle your neck as a small smile made its way to your face.

"Sure you do Luddy." You stroked his slicked back blonde hair.

"It's true (Name), I'll alvays liebe you no matter vhat, and besides you look amazing zhe vay your are." He gently kissed your blushing cheek and turning your body on his lap so you were straddling him.

"Ich liebe dich (Name)."

"You're so sweet Luddy, I love you too."

"I can zhink of somezhing sweeter." He said deeply pulling you closer his hands grabbing your soft sides.

"What would that be luddy?" You gently kissed the top of his nose as he beamed at you.

"Zhose vonderful luscious lips of yours." He kissed you deeply as his hands roamed your soft body tracing every curve and dip. That night you discovered something all together sweeter than your German's famous Peppermint pie.

It was the German himself.
Just a short chubby readerxGermany reader insert I thought about while baking today.

I hope you all enjoyed it!
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:iconcaramellcat1998:
CaramellCat1998 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015
Do we really speak like that >w<
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TheRedPanda786 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 13, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
I'm Fat, But I don't let it bother me. I don't listen to other people's rude comments. I just see it as being a cuddly marshmallow X3
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hellgirl1998 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
My face:
Tomoyo Blushing Icon 

My heart:
Whoosh 
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FlandreScarlet12 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
I'm fat and i'm proud i don't care what people think i know i am gonna find the perfect guy this helps me be confident and i love your work.
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bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
That's what I love to hear!!!~ I'm so glad I can be of some help!~ You're so right and I hope that everyone knows that they're perfect and lovely the way that they are!~ Well, thanks much hun, and I admire that soaring confidence of yours!~ <3
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
Clapping Epic clap Clap Dr.Steel claps fo you Clap  LOVE IT~!
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Lforeverisa Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
I wanna eat that peppermint pie!!! Oh and good old Luddy, please will you get me some cream puffs?
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ZennazFFz Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
dude, peppermint pie? He wouldn't NEED to try convincing me cuz I'd be all over it before he could finish making it!~

I really like minty things, and that's just beautiful on so many levels.

Me: PEPPERMINT PIE?! Ludwig, you DO love me!!!~~ <333 Screw the diet, THAT PIE IS MINE.
Ludwig: Vell, ja. Here's a fork! :)
Me: *ignores fork and just starts licking it and sticking my face all over it...*
Ludwig: ...  How did I end up with such a silly fraulein for a girlfriend? >.<
Me: *face all messy* Becuz I'm just too cute for you to ignore!~~
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brightpaw8 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
IKR! I was reading the title and was like OMG PEPPER MINT~~~~~ <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Narrator Me: And Ray was left with two choices: She could pick the German boyfriend she had... Or Peppermint Pie.
Me: I CHOOSE PIE!
Germany: I swear, somezhing is wrong wiz zhat girl...
Me: Nu uh! *sticks tongue out at luddy* By the way, Have you seen Kiku? I need to borrow some of his Manga...
Germany: -_-'
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marshmellowchanny Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Its so beautiful! TwT
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:iconmegibabe:
megibabe Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student General Artist
everyone else wants ludwig. I on the other hand want that peppermint pie! T_T
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BlackLionessQueen Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Me too it sounds delicious
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nekokitty35 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HDHGHSHSUS!!!!! GERMANY Y U NO REAL!!!?
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AlfredJones13 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
Ikr
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!
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badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
* sniff * now I want a german hetaloid and a piece of pie .....T~T
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:iconfangirlhetalia:
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AGREE!!! WANT!!! ALL THE WANT!!!!
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badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X)
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mystery942 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
After I finished this I squealed. So good!!!
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THAT IS IT. SOMEONE NEEDS TO GET ME A GERMANY HETALOID FOR CHRISTMAS OR MY BIRTHDAY!....too many stories of yours have made me want!....sorry for the outrage...:icontearsplz:
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:iconpewdelia12:
Pewdelia12 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whyyyyyyyy life is no fair! I need my own Germany!!!!
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XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student General Artist

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

THE FEELS MAN THE FEELS

I LOVE Germany o3o

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flyingmintbunny2013 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student General Artist
*sniff* stupid reality.... why can't we all just live in our own world?
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Hetalia4Ever99 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Sighs* Where's Germany when you need him? I'm single, chubby, (according to everyone else I'm the perfect weight for my build, but I just don't see it) and want nothing more than to find someone who accepts me.... But that's next to impossible in my case. If it wasn't bad enough that I don't look the nicest, I also have a lot of mental problems, including possible bipolarness, thoughts of suicide, and moments of wanting to murder everyone. 0_0 What the f*** is wrong with me????!!!!!!!! Wish I could say I'm chubby and proud, but I'm not.... Oh, and just so ya know, I actually do pretty well at hiding my mental problems. I usually cover it up with a smile and a laugh to keep everyone from worrying. Only really close friends know about it, not even my psychiatrist knows. I only put it out here as well because I feel like others will understand. Anyway, enough ranting. I wanted to thank you for writing such a wonderful story that made me feel good about myself, if only for a moment.
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
....I...I...understand that perfectly....I have the SAME EXACT issue...do...do you have anime characters living with you???
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Hetalia4Ever99 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
0.0 Actially, I do. Every single time I watch a new anime, they kinda move in... ^^; I really was worried I was the only one...
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhugplz: HOW MANY HETALIA GROUPS DO YOU HAVE??!!! I HAVE SEVEN, PLUS VOCALOID, PLUS HUNGER GAMES, PLUS PIRATES OF THE CARRIBEAN(all four), ST. FROG, STEVE, AO ONI, PEWDS(in a room where I can't enter[there's even a World Meeting room!]), PLUS TOO MANY FOR MY SHORT-TERM MEMORY TO REMEMBER. HOW ABOUT YOU???!!!Headache 
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Hetalia4Ever99 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I stopped counting awhile ago actually. ^^; I could try but.... There's Doctor Who, the entirety of Hetalia, Sgt. Frog, I think there's a seperate part for Mr. Chair and the barrels (something about them getting a room to face off in) Pokémon.... Just a lot. There's even their own lobby where they mingle. It gets.... Crowded to say the least. And then there's the moments when fights break out and Germany somehow manages to make EVERYONE stop. It's odd at times, but funny to watch and/or listen to.
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What about their "powers"??!! Can they see everything you see(excepting on the computer/laptop), feel what you feel, hear what you hear, and can read most of your thoughts???!!!! I GET TOO MANY HEADACHES, AND THEY CRITICIZE EVERY ACTION I MAKE!!!!!
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Hetalia4Ever99 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely. The main ones that seem to love criticizing me are England, Germany, and Giroro. It's a bit of an odd mix, but those are the ones that are always on my case.... As for what they can see, they can literally see and do almost anything while they're inside me. (Occasionally they'll step away for a little bit, at least, out from under the radar, to do things.) For example, France has found a way into my memories on multiple occasions. It gets annoying, but I can't stop him....
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU ARE THE LUCKY ONE!!!!!! ALL OF THEM CRITICIZED ME TOO MUCH AND ASK ME TOO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!! THEY DON'T WANNA BE HERE, AND NOW THE 2ps! ARE COMING, AS WELL AS THEIR OPPOSITE GENDERS!!!!! EVEN SOME BANDS, SUCH AS GREEN DAY, TOOL, AND THE FOO FIGHTERS ARE HERE!!! I SUFFER FROM SHORT-TERM MEMORY LOSS(I think that's what it is called, when you can barely remember anything you did[except for the really fun stuff, i.e.: Santa Barbara, Disneyland])BECAUSE OF THEM!!!!!:iconcryforeverplz: I......I can't take it anymore....will someone just help me????!!!*"I Need A Hero", "I Feel Like A Monster"(by Skillet), and "Insanity"(by Hatsune Miku) going through my head* This is all my fault.....I....feel horrible.....:iconknifeplz:*2p! England smile* See ya~
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Orange-Flamethrower Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
╭∩╮(TT___TT)╭∩╮ FUCK YOU REALITY!!!! WHY ARE YOU SUCH AN ASS?!
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LeeAyna-Abadeer Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student
My liebeling doesn't do that to me.. only other girls. Great, I feel like crying now!
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yuunaibuke Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My life was bad now i realize something having a boyfriend is awesome mine is just like him hes even part german funny huh
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PixelatedGurl Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy for you! It's always nice to find that special someone who loves you no matter what you look like. As long as you're beautiful on the inside, that's all that matters. :iconbrohugplz: 
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yuunaibuke Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You got that right
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DeviantLilGirl Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
you must convince him to cosplay as Germany... just a crazy suggestion!
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yuunaibuke Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually he did for a dare his brother cause they made a bet on who could get me to slap one of them his brother one guys such a perv
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz:~^^
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Hetalimichigan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Reality.... Why can't you go away?
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tea-and-tai Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconclapplz:
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sis545 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Writer
I should've known
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RainbowFactoryDashie Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Chubby= in manga ALL chibis are cute and chubby like us

Skinny = TWIG....can be broken easily...
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Forest6654 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's why I hate being skinny. >X(
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RainbowFactoryDashie Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh I didn't mean to afend anyone but even if you are skinny or chubby you are pretty no matter what!
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Forest6654 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your right. :) Thank you!
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RainbowFactoryDashie Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
you are welcome.
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JeseniaVLopez Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinuclapplz:
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bdolphin15 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I could find someone like this Germany..... I really need him :(
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