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“Take it all off vight now (Name).” You looked up at your German Boyfriend who was standing in front of you.

You were soaked by the sudden downpour that occurred outside on your way to Ludwig’s house and now here you were standing in his hallway dripping wet and freezing cold.

You refused to take the wet clothes off like Ludwig demanded and change into some of his clothing because you didn’t want him to see your body in his cloths.

You wore the baggy shirts and pants for a reason. They were to hide your unattractive, flabby body from your perfect, muscled German man. You knew he’d probably dump you right on the spot and quite frankly you didn’t want to take that chance.

“Not a chance Luddy, besides I’m perfectly fine.” You flashed him a forced smile as you tried not to get your teeth to chatter.

“You are a terrible liar Liebe.” He smirked at you most likely knowing you were really cold and miserable in your current state.

‘Stupid sexy smartass German hunk.’ You thought this to yourself as unknowingly to you, Ludwig advanced closer to you.

“If you aren’t going to do as I say, zhen I’ll just take zhem off for you (Name).”
Before you could question him any further, he had you in his arms and over his shoulder as he started to walk towards his room.

With you of course making a commotion on his back.

“Luddy put me down, I’m way too heavy for you!” You pounded on his solid rock like back and huffed in annoyance giving up as he suddenly plopped you onto his soft bed.

You started to shield your body only to have his strong hands grab yours and easily pry them away from his access points.

You felt your wet shirt come off as well as your pants as you made noises of protests only to have Ludwig smile down at you as he grabbed sweats and a shirt from one of his drawers.

“I don’t know vhy you’re all vorked up (Name).” You sat up on the bed clad in only your undergarments as you sighed and looked up at Ludwig who sat the warm clothes next to you.

“Because I didn’t want you to see all of this nastiness Luddy.” You grabbed you belly to prove your point. It was true, you weren’t thin in the slightest. You were quite chunky well everywhere.

You slowly looked up at Ludwig afraid to see his face. You were surprisingly greeted by a smile and a sort of adoring look in his strikingly bright blue eyes.

“Liebe, you’re beautiful zhis vay, being chunky iz adorable on you.” He sat next to you and pulled you into his lap making you blush and squirm in his lap since you were still only in your undergarments.

“Adorable, but don’t I embarrass you Luddy?” You felt a kiss on your cheek as he nuzzled your neck.

“(Name), you could never embarrass me, if I could I vould show you off to zhe entire vorld liebe.” You felt a blush coming onto your (Skin color) skin as he continued to shower you in sweet compliments.

You felt him move so he could pull down the covers of his bed as he laid you down on the mattress as he lay next to you and pulled the blankets over the two of you.

“Luddy, I need to put some clothes on.” You started to get up from the warmth of the blankets only to have Ludwig pull you back down and onto his strong chest.

One hand tangling itself in your (Hair color and length) locks while the other had an iron grip on your plump waist.

“Nein you don’t (Name), I vant you like zhis, you’re too adorable to be covered up.” He pulled you even closer as you could feel his heat radiating off of him as you snuggled into him deeper inhaling his scent as you looped your arms around his shoulders pulling yourself up to settle your head in the crook of his strong neck.

“I love you Luddy.” You kissed his neck and reached up to plant a light kiss on his lips.

“I liebe you too (Name).”

He pulled you into a more heated kiss as he rolled over and pinned you to the mattress yanking the covers back off and revealing yourself to him.

“Just zhe way I like it.” You blushed at his statement but smiled nonetheless finally knowing Ludwig loved you and the way you looked.

Let’s just say that night, you were never cold once.
So.... My first drabble type of write.

Good, bad, so-so? Please tell me what you thought! I wanted to do another chunky reader because I've enjoyed writing them lately! :D

Story (c) :iconbonkers-4-hatter:

Hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:

You (c) :iconsexygermanyplz:
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AnonymousrebelRebel Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
RESPECT! keep on writing dudette i loved it, just the right amount of detail and great innuendo use toward the end. And by using it that's a valid ending, but you could always pick up on it later. it was a perfect drabble and not a mini novel, i say E perfectto mia principessa!
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renji2716 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Student Artist
I was reading this and Rick Astley 'Never Gonna Give You Up' came on XD
by the way this was great
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muuu1234 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
Hhhhhhh dat title...
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:iconriverleap:
Riverleap Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Misleading title is misleading
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brightpaw8 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
Er mah gerd..... Dat title >////////< BAD MIND!
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Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
dirty mind.........satisfied by the ending 
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sunshineg9 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Eh, i should probably stop reading these. Goodness knows how arrogant i am. So much when he said that the reader looks cute by being chubby i yelled, damn right i am! But i just can't stop becuase this is to cute!
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BeigeCascade Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hurrrrrrrr I'm warm now 
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Female-Canada Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Let’s just say that night, you were never cold once.

*crosses legs like the scene in Clue*
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OneHellofaPancake Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
God dammit title  Husky WTF face 

Still, I really like the story!!
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Killerbunny2022 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That title really have me the wrong idea~
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LadyFaustus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Dat title... Dat title be very misleading.... ;)
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nekokitty35 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Agreed... Lol dirty minds UNITE!!!
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LadyFaustus Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
Indeed! :icondatassplz:
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nekokitty35 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyusplz:
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There's just one TINY problem...it needs :iconmoarplz:!!!!
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PlatinumUnicorn Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
..I would ask for a part 2 ._.
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your name...I am part :iconunicornplz:, and part :iconbananasplz:!!!!! I'm only 1/2 human!!!!
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xXGothicLifeXx Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
I'm fluffy an thats the way i like uh-huh uh-huh
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shelbyfrisk Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
TT^TT i love this!!!
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:iconotakugirl14:
OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I used to think i was Ugly and Fat but not any more Tank you *crying*
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yaoigirlNOM Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Artist
-hugs you- BEING CHUBBEH IS A GIFT NOT CURSE ALWAYS BE YOUR SELF!! Meowhug Meowhug Meowhug Meowhug 
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I will thanks *hugs back*
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:iconyaoigirlnom:
yaoigirlNOM Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Artist
^^
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:iconev231:
Ev231 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student General Artist
So sweet! :)
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bluewolf14 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
I love this story! :love:
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bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Thanks hun~! Glad you enjoyed it <3
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maevezz11 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
I'm not too big but I have a goal to feel comfortable in a swimsuit by summer time!!!
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Kisimtate Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Artist
That was so sweet
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princessminight Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
So cute
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Nekokun542 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That awkward moment when you're reading this(and absolutely loving it) and the add displayed is for a type of bra...
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bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
XD Glad you like it!!~ <3 That happens to me too!
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thats the way i uh-huh-huh i like it uh-uhhuh!
germany: speaking of it, u do seem a little flabby... ;)
me: asshole! (185 lbs)
germany: zhis is zhe way I like it!
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PockyandAnime Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
X3
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsexygermanyplz: :XD:
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SecretGermanyLover Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You make me feel fat.....I am around 200 and I'm only 13. THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GET ABUSED AT SCHOOL AND BY LAW ENFORCEMENT BECAUSE YOU ARE OF A DIFFERENT RELIGION IN THE USA!!!!
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O.o... i'm sorry... :'(
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YamYamHam Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
UHHHHHHHH I LOVE YOU. I HONESTLY DON'T KNOW WHY I HAVENT FOLLOWED YOU YET.
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princessminight Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
Then do it or the pasta gets it (is about to drop the pasta
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:iconyamyamham:
YamYamHam Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Haha I did long ago!
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princessminight Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Writer
Ok (gives u pasta
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YamYamHam Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
:iconpastaaaaaaa:
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:iconprincessminight:
princessminight Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
Yup
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RainbowRings Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
sweet
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Akatsuki-Leader2012 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Love!! <3! :)
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ASDFGH!! I love this!! >U< <33
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