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Your (Eye Color) orbs fluttered open as they quickly squinted against the rays of the sun that was shining through the halfway open curtains.

You moaned in protest slightly irritated that was the reason you were awake as you tried to get up from the bed only to no avail. You smiled as you looked down to see your boyfriend's arm wrapped tightly around your middle.

You frowned slightly as you saw some flab poking up from both sides of his arm as you tried to wiggle free from his iron grip only to have him tighten his hold and pull you to him snuggling you to him.

"was ist der Ansturm Liebe?" You looked up from his rising chest to gaze into his bright blue eyes. He smiled down at you and leaned down to kiss your forehead lightly and nuzzled the top of your head inhaling your scent.

You snapped out of the slight daze you were in, it always seemed he had that affect on you but you didn't mind it made you feel all that more special. You smirked lightly at the question you asked you not because of the question itself, but for the fact that you knew what he asked. Ludwig had recently started to give you German lessons and you've been doing some studying on your end making you feel even proud that he wouldn't have to translate this time.

"There's none Luddy, sorry I woke you." You felt his vibrating chuckle as you felt the hand that was around your soft tummy unwind itself as it started to stroke your back lightly making you moan lightly in appreciation.

"Vell, looks like somevone has been practicing" You laughed lightly and nodded as Ludwing rolled to his side and brought the hand that was caressing your back to your face and moved some of your (Hair Length and Color) locks out of your face.

"Du bist so schön" The German said this as he kissed your lips lightly resting his hand at your waist which he gave a small squeeze to. When the short kiss ended you looked back up at the man that just said that to you and frowned.


You were not even acquainted to a word like that before. You never were the pretty, thin type. You were always the chunky girl and you still were. Why on earth would someone like Ludwing who was the sweetest most caring person and not to mention perfect in every aspect call someone like yourself; the fat plain girl beautiful.

You felt some tears spring up in your (Eye Color) eyes as Ludwig quickly noticed and gently grabbed your face to look at you.

"Vhat's Vrong (Name), vhy are you crying Liebe?" You smiled at that sweet word at the end.


He always called you love and you could not understand why. He deserved someone that was actually in his league and not someone who was twenty thousand miles away from it.

"Why Luddy?" You placed your hands over his fairly large ones as he leaned closer to you the look of worry spread across his handsome face.

"Vhy vhat (Name)?"

"I need to know why on earth do you think I'm beautiful, I don't understand how you could." Your eyes darted away from his pained filled Blue ones as he pulled you towards him fast pulling you into a rough kiss.

You felt a blush come across your (Skin Color) cheeks as your German pinned you to the bed and straddled your waist as he finally pulled up from the heated kiss. You were flushed and breathless you tried to regain you breathing as Ludwig looked at you with a flushed gaze and a small grin.

"Sie weiß es wirklich nicht?" You bit your slightly bruised lip and shook your head no as he sighed and slid his large hot hands down your arms, the curve of your torso and waist and up onto your tummy. You made noises of protests as he ignore you and continued to slide his hands everywhere over your tummy knowing well that you hated that.

"Because I love you dumme ein." Your eyes snapped up to him as he smiled at you and slid his hands back up to your face to cup it lightly and plant a kiss on your nose.


Luddy loved you....

You felt yourself smile wide at your boyfriends confession as you wrapped your arms around his strong neck and pulled him down to you.

"You really do Ludwing, all of me?" You asked this quietly as he laughed out loud at your question kissing your still flushed cheek.

"Vhy of course all of you (Name)!" You laughed along with him.

"I love your chubby cheeks." He kissed both of your flushed cheeks as he leaned back to observe you.

"I love your button nose." He leaned down to lightly kiss said nose.

"I love those kissable lips of yours." He pecked your lips.

"I love your soft neck." He trailed kisses from your jaw down to the base of your neck making your breath hitch in your throat for a moment.

"I love your soft arms that vrap around me every night." He kissed his way down one arm while trailed one hand down the other and then vice versa.

"I love your soft chest so I can lay my head on it und listen to zhat vonderful heart of yours." He then trailed kisses from your collar bone down and around your clothed breasts. You let out a soft moan at the action.

"I especially love zhis soft tummy of yours." He continued his trail of kisses over your soft tummy all the way to your navel.

"L-luddy." You looked up to see him with a sparkle in his eyes and a sloppy grin on his face.

"Ja (Name)?"

"I love you too Luddy." He smiled down at you and leaned down to capture your lips in a kiss as he rolled to two of you over so you were on top of him straddling him. You broke the kiss and started to protest.

"Nein, you are not getting down (Name), your vine vhere you are liebe."

"I-I'm not crushing you am I Luddy?"

"Nein, vhy vould you even think zhat (Name)?" You shrugged your shoulders in defeat not knowing what to say anymore at this point.

"Schatz, I feel in love vith you und your personality not vith how much you weigh."

"Thank-you Luddy, I love you so much." You leaned down to kiss him lightly.

"Una I love you too (Name), now get your sexy ass over here so I can show you just how much I love you."

Let's just say that whole day was spent in bed with your German boyfriend who defiantly showed you how much he loved you that day and every day after that.
Another reader insert I thought of today and wanted to write.

was ist der Ansturm Liebe = What's the rush love?

Du bist so schön = You are so beautiful

Liebe = Love

Sie weiß es wirklich nicht = You really don't know?

dumme ein = stupid one

nein = no

Schatz = sweetheart


I hope you all enjoy it! :) I just loves Germany!!
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EpicCatBomb Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015   Digital Artist
You said defiantly instead of definitely at the end.

good story though, I enjoyed it <3 :>
Rj223 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
I frickin love this!!
animelover4301 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
mikufangalaxy123 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this so much~!
Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I feel proud that i could translate all but 2 of those, and have never taken a german class. And Damn. He must have alot alot alot of energy. 
Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SakuraWhitefang Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student General Artist
The german was good, except for "Sie weiß es wirklich nicht", because the Sie form of you is formal, Du sholdve been used.
PersonificationMD Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist
*cough* It's Ludwig not Ludwing *cough*
Great story anyways
Sarcasticme101 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I honestly think it was a accident and it was a great story
echoknows Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Ditto and also it's definitely not defiantly
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!!!(I guess)
megibabe Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student General Artist
this is so cute!! but can i correct you on something? "dumme ein" makes no sense. the correct way of saying that sentence would be "because i love you du dumme" it sounds a bit different but means the same thing. (sorry to go all grammar-police on you, but i'm austrian.)
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
it's okay~! Thank you for that! I had to use google translate so I knew some of this wasn't right XD
megibabe Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student General Artist
yeah. google translate sucks. :D
XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student General Artist
~SQUEE! So cuute o3o
Hetalia4Ever99 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That, my friend, was amazing! I'm not sure if I what weight type I am (according to my friend I'm the perfect weight for my build) but reading this makes me feel better about myself (why do I feel so insecure???) Anyway, off to read more of your stories! :)
Nals-luff Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Defiantly or definitely? I'm confused. :D

GREAT story~ 8D
SecretGermanyLover Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty sure schatz means treasure. Because I know that suBer(I am substituting an upper class b for that weird one) means sweetie.
Penguinqueen423 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Thank you! I wasn't sure how people would like the chunky reader :/
Penguinqueen423 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A lot of people would like to see these kinds of fics. Especially because of the stupid media these days.
Leafpaw616 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I love this, seeing reader inserts where the reader is plus-sized makes me happy ^-^
bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
:iconiloveyouplz: YES!!! Us big girls need some lovin' too!! XD I wish more people would write plus sized reader inserts! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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